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When I’m lost, I don’t know where to go
It seemed the world has turned so slow
When I see the winter flurry
The animals see it, off they scurry

The clock stopped ticking long ago
Off in the distance, I hear a crow
Everyone else halts in mid-walk
I wave my hand, see if they talk

Everything’s frozen, cold and forbidden
Deep in the snow is where their lives are hidden
I run down the streets, scream and shout
I want this to end! I want out!

Stuck in a dream bubble, that’s where I am
Weather came out as a lion, transformed from the lamb
When I shiver, I watch as my breath begins to dance
No one around me had a chance

Everyone’s stuck in mid air
Seeing their faces gives me a scare
Men, Women, Children too
Not moving, as if coated in glue

Snow stops in mid-fall and I wonder why
What happened to the shattered sky?
Glancing up I see no movement
I left the city to lament

I catch a squirrel, running, but stuck
Behind it is the worst of its luck
A giant wolf with glinting fangs
But its stuck, won’t move from even a guns bangs

There’s a time when I look up at the stars
Passing the frozen and halting cars
Where I see the line of your face
The lines are held with such grace

And when you left it all froze over
It’s just as unlucky as never finding a four-leaf-clover
When things die, I die too
That’s why I should belong with you

When you left things just froze
Soon it’ll start from my head, then to my toes
Solid confinement, deep crushing stone
Why did you ever leave me alone?
©2006-2009 ~Frodobursh
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Yeah it doesn't really have a meaning it was just a spill of rhymes, etc. Honestly it doesn't really mean much to anyone, seriously. I just wrote it to practice my poems lol. I hope you like it anyway.

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:icontreijim:
It's a nice spill of rhymes. I suck at rhyming when I try and it only happens by accident XD

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:iconfrodobursh:
Sometimes I do too that's why I try my best to rhyme lol

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:iconninjamatty:
wow it is so beautiful *O* you are very good with the rhymes ! =D
:iconfrodobursh:
:aww: Thanks I'm glad you like it :hug:

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:rose: If you ever get caught watching someone in a shower, just declare this to them: "It's okay! I'm an artist!" :rose:
:iconkhalbrm:
I suck at rhyming, and writing poetry in general. I just suck at writing. It's great. =3
:iconfrodobursh:
Thanks much :hug: I usually am not that good at rhyming either ^^;

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:rose: If you ever get caught watching someone in a shower, just declare this to them: "It's okay! I'm an artist!" :rose:
:iconlwcldylan:
for a practice piece I think it came out wonderfully!

I especially like the repeating idea of frozen objects in time. And the fact they cannot move makes it even more interesting.

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:iconfrodobursh:
:aww: Thanks I'm glad you like it :hug:

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:rose: If you ever get caught watching someone in a shower, just declare this to them: "It's okay! I'm an artist!" :rose:
:icontomboychick714:
omg i luved it, i was gunna ask wut it means but you said nothin really, for a practice poem its super good, lol,

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